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PostSubject: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 7:41 pm

This is like a shop (E.g. like Gelatino's prop shop) but this one is for storylines which are for adventures. I have no clue if i am good at making storylines but I like trying.
Sooooooooo.
Tell me about the creatures, buildings, effects, location and other stuff and I will try my hardest to think up a good story. tupps!

Total storylines made Arrow 1

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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 7:44 pm

cool! just what i need, so basically, i've made a colony, and it is a mountainy/hilly area, and its very inspired by ryuujin, so the storyline should be tragic, epic, and in depth :Wink:
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 9:00 pm

I have thought about it I have the begining and middle here-

Begining
The colony was just made and the citizens start harvesting the surrounding places for resources. But many go mysteriously missing you are called to find the missing workers.
Middle
You start to explore the mountain and discover many dead workers all of which died in different ways. You are faced with many different challanges. Then at a part of your treck a bridge (or something like that) collapses and in front of you is a creature which is scary and big (but not epic). It starts to slowly walk towards you (The player is warned that the creatures abilities are unknown and its strength as well. The player just needs to walk into the creature and it will disappear. But if the player is cowardly he/she will take their chances with the bottom of the cliff which leads to death.) The creature was a mirage and the bridge collaping was as well. Your character will guess that the workers died because of this mirage.
You continue.

I will think up the ending soon I already have a good idea of what I will do I just need to think about some other ideas first. tupps!
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 9:09 pm

Sounds awesome, but what causes the mirages (sorry if i'm being fussy but i like my adventures to have depth to them)

also that fits well with the scenery so far tupps! Cheers!
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 9:13 pm

The cause is in the next part.
Do you want a boss?
It will help me chose from the 2 ideas I have
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 9:46 pm

errrrr not really :I

And thats good happy.
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 10:46 pm

End
You get to a summit there you find a blue light glowing above a skeleton. You get teleported into a room of light you examine a flower in the center of the room. You hear two people talking to each other.

Boy: Don't worry I will keep it safe.
Girl: Promise?
Boy: Promise
Girl: You will return right?
Boy: Don't worry I will be fine.
Girl: Good Bye.

The light was a strong memory of a person who died and failed to return. You teleport back. The flower is then next to the skeleton you pick it up.
Behind you a creature approches you he talks to you and says you are worthy of a very important task. He tells you that the mirages and challanges were his doing he is called Mirago. He has lived here for many years when a person badly wounded came to him for help but he failed to save him. His last wish was for someone to return the flower to his love his last wish became mixed with his memory which made it visible. Mirago couldn't find his love so when the citzens landed he tested them but none suceeded apart from you. So he askes you to return the flower for his and the persons sake since his wish became the same. He opens a teleporter back to the town.........

Next part continues in the next box
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptyFri Apr 01, 2011 11:01 pm

You return and tell the leader of the village of that the cause was a dieing wish and that all the workers died as a result. You ask him if anyone ever died on this planet before they settled here. He replies

Yes. We beamed down 6 people to examine the condition of the planet 1 was never found. You ask about if he has a girl friend or wife he tells you that his love is in the house to the (Up to you where the house is).

You return the flower she thanks you she asks you where he died you tell her.

MISSION COMPLETE
End text- 2 words enter your head as you leave Thank you.

I tried to add depth and tragedy hope you like it.
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptySat Apr 02, 2011 6:03 am

I already have one of these.

https://alac.forumotion.com/t300-adventure-starter

In case you didn't know.
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptySat Apr 02, 2011 11:35 am

Awesome sounds great. I will probably do some tweaking though but those ideas are great and i will definitely use them. Happy.
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptySat Apr 02, 2011 1:29 pm

Thanks glad you like it. happy.

Gelatino95 sorry I didn't know Angel
Inappropriate smiley I know....
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PostSubject: Re: StoryLine Shop   StoryLine Shop EmptySat Apr 09, 2011 7:44 pm

BUMP

well basically i thought that you might be interested to know that the adventure is now finished :D
You can see it here: StoryLine Shop 500730443798

heres the hyperlink too:
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500730443798

Please play and give feedback, remember, it is completable, trust me you just have to think :P
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