A new adventure idea by me

Okay, so I'm about halfway through making a remake of this adventure:


Image, of course, is clicky.

Warning: You may not be able to play this adventure, as it was a very old one of mine made back when I didn't understand the concept of making it so all captains can complete the adventure. You can at least open it in editor.

Anyway, the basic plot is this: A planet it being torn apart by opposite forces, so you go down there and defeat some mythical beasts to rescue two swords that, when brought together, will ensure that the planet will remain safe. So here's a screenshot of what I've got going so far:



Basically, the first part of the adventure is going to be a lake of lava where you have to traverse a network of platforms to find some keys to get into the structure containing a teleporter (the big purple pillar of light)

So give any opinions or suggestions you may have for this adventure, please.

Looks awesome. Can't wait until it comes out. My suggestion would be, put some more buildings around the lava. Like some destroyed building, burning buildings maybe some ancient pillars. That is of course if your going for a mythical theme.

I'm actually going for a natural theme, like a planet that hasn't been touched by civilization for centuries due to the extreme climate. But thanks for the advice anyway.

More background, I'd liven it up with rocks.

SugarRush99 wrote:

More background, I'd liven it up with rocks.

I was about to say that.

RazorKnight wrote:

SugarRush99 wrote:

More background, I'd liven it up with rocks.

I was about to say that.

Great minds think alike

I was planning on placing some random giant rocks in the distance. Thanks for the tip, though. And I may add a few small rocks in the lake area, too.

It's cool, although I am not a person that likes to slay beasts.


Mush better than ANY of my adventures.

More pics, more angles, ECT. Would help.

The plot sounds familar...

By request of Drew, here are a few screenshots of puzzles that I will include in the lava lake section:


This is going to be a broken piece of stone path that the captain will jump over using a jet of water if they don't have any jumping abilities. On the other side will be a key.


A small chamber protected by a force field containing the key. You have to find another key behind the chamber to open up the force field.


The entrance to a short teleporter maze that is scattered throughout the lake. The end of the maze is outside the lake, so the captain can't access it by flying across to the other teleporters.

Okay, so those are some of the puzzles in the lava lake. I'm not completely finished with the boss arena where you will fight the first boss, but here's the creature that you will have to fight:


(Do I even have to mention that the image is clicky?)

So, that's what I've got so far. The boss battle should be fairly easy to make. However, I'm going to need some ideas for a puzzle to use in the ice section of the adventure. Preferably one big puzzle rather than a couple of small puzzles. So give me your suggestions, please!