TEAM GAC1

byball9 wrote:

Sorry I can't help! Just don't have a lot time.

He came, he saw, he failed
Lolwut...?

Anyway, Aren't you in Team GAC2?

GACModGlass wrote:

They look great! They are PNG am i correct?

Yeah, I decided to use the small PNGs so the page wouldn't be too long. I usually do that when I'm posting more than one picture.

Gelatino95 wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

They look great! They are PNG am i correct?

Yeah, I decided to use the small PNGs so the page wouldn't be too long. I usually do that when I'm posting more than one picture.

Good! Then i'm draging them into ma game!

byball9 wrote:

Sorry I can't help! Just don't have a lot time.

Oook...

That didn't really make sense i guess..

How so?

byball9 wrote:

How so?

Sorry i can't help! Just don't have a lot time.

Well, Your in Team GAC 2! Are you even supposed to be helping us?

Okay, so this is how I'm envisioning the story:

You arrive at the mountain tribe to find that they have recently been receiving notes threatening to destroy their tribe, from an unknown sender. They are almost certain that the notes are coming from the valley tribe, who is violent and military-minded. The captain goes down to the valley to investigate and talks to the chieftain, but the chief denies having anything to do with the mountain tribe. As you go back to the mountain tribe, you notice a group of people conspiring against the mountain tribe. They say that they came from the mountain tribe, but follow a different belief system. They are preparing to destroy the mountain tribe and take it as their own!

And I'm not sure what to do with the rest of the story, but I'm working on it! Tell me what you think so far!

And Glass, I think team GAC2 is comprised of Drago, D_H, Mudo, Gamer, and Krechur.

1)The story seems great Gelo! A great plot!

Why not make it like this:
You try to find out more why these other tribesman are threating the tribe, while the valley tribe seems threatened and tricked, and declares war. Oh no! Wat shall you do? Make the war stop or find the threateners...
More i can't come up with

2)I see.

3) I gotta go! BYE!

I'll start making a v4, but only if nobody else is currently making one. If you are, please let me know and I'll wait 'till you're done.

GACModGlass wrote:

Why not make it like this:
You try to find out more why these other tribesman are threating the tribe, while the valley tribe seems threatened and tricked, and declares war. Oh no! Wat shall you do? Make the war stop or find the threateners...
More i can't come up with

I think that may be a bit too complicated for a single adventure. I think I'll stick with my current idea for now. Maybe when we're done this one, we can make a sequel out of that idea. :Wink:

Me is terribly confused
Just count me out of this team.

Well, it looks like it's up to me now. I'll start making the v4.

NO WAIT! i DO NOT like gelo's rover, and i will fiox that that it just ruins the landskape.

camelfox wrote:

NO WAIT! i DO NOT like gelo's rover, and i will fiox that that it just ruins the landskape.

First of all, please fix your grammar. At times, it is hard to understand what you are saying.

Second, I did not make the river. I think Glass did.

Third, I'm already in the middle of v4 and doing very well with constructing the story. If you want to fix it, I can start over, as I don't like the river very much anyway. And I think we need to start filling in the post you reserved earlier for the story.

ok, sorry about the grammar... anyway, i've made a V3 as well, so how about i share mine, and then we edit off of that because i fixed a few technical bugs.

problem is my spore quit, so i dunno if i'll have to eat my dinner before it loads back up again...

Hey, don't worry about it, I took out the river myself, so I don't have to start over all my work.

also the buildings?

Yes, I got rid of the bridge. I just made it into a path going up the mountain. By the by, I just finished v4 and am sharing it now. I got most of the story in place, but I can't figure out how to make it so you befriend the Barbarian King in act 4... the AI seems to be working strangely. If anyone can figure this out, that would be great.

Here it is: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-Gelatino95|500484375448:sast-500652727399

yeah OK, and tomorow when i go through it i MAY change it a bit.

Okay Gelo, I'm playing the adventure and look it'll through.

GACModGlass wrote:

Okay Gelo, I'm playing the adventure and look it'll through.

Okay, For the first i couldn't be friend with the Scrowla Chieftan because he was a redy!

And then, It was way to easy, Not so mnay goals. (i want many goals to make it exciting).
And, There we're no action! You just talked, talked, talked and talked..

-___-

We shall develop

GACModGlass wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

Okay Gelo, I'm playing the adventure and look it'll through.

Okay, For the first i couldn't be friend with the Scrowla Chieftan because he was a redy!

And then, It was way to easy, Not so mnay goals. (i want many goals to make it exciting).
And, There we're no action! You just talked, talked, talked and talked..

-___-

We shall develop

Yeah, I always lean more toward story in my adventures. But I don't think I ever made it a goal to befriend the chieftain? (unless you're talking about the barbarian king)

I definitely think there need to be more goals. Thanks for pointing that out. But I don't think there should be any major battles, after all, it's supposed to be a socialization mission.

Gelatino95 wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

Okay Gelo, I'm playing the adventure and look it'll through.

Okay, For the first i couldn't be friend with the Scrowla Chieftan because he was a redy!

And then, It was way to easy, Not so mnay goals. (i want many goals to make it exciting).
And, There we're no action! You just talked, talked, talked and talked..

-___-

We shall develop

Yeah, I always lean more toward story in my adventures. But I don't think I ever made it a goal to befriend the chieftain? (unless you're talking about the barbarian king)

I definitely think there need to be more goals. Thanks for pointing that out. But I don't think there should be any major battles, after all, it's supposed to be a socialization mission.

IT IS?!

Oh..
Social?
Oh..

-____-

Well, yeah.

GACModGlass wrote:

Gelatino95 wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

GACModGlass wrote:

Okay Gelo, I'm playing the adventure and look it'll through.

Okay, For the first i couldn't be friend with the Scrowla Chieftan because he was a redy!

And then, It was way to easy, Not so mnay goals. (i want many goals to make it exciting).
And, There we're no action! You just talked, talked, talked and talked..

-___-

We shall develop

Yeah, I always lean more toward story in my adventures. But I don't think I ever made it a goal to befriend the chieftain? (unless you're talking about the barbarian king)

I definitely think there need to be more goals. Thanks for pointing that out. But I don't think there should be any major battles, after all, it's supposed to be a socialization mission.

IT IS?!

Oh..
Social?





Oh..

-____-

Well, yeah.

camelfox is loading spore. gimme a link, and I'll take care f this.

ok, so the adventure was good, (i got rid of the river and bridge...) and also i added snow, but i THOUGHT we were gonna write a draft story-line before we actually implemented it, and quite honestly, i don't think it was ... that good. so how about i write one HERE, and then we'll agree on it.