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A simple adventure which feels it could have been done by anybody. It wasn't really bad but it wasn't really good either. It feels like it missed that extra glimps of Story. There we're some things that could have been developed. And here is my critique.

Story: 3/5
The story of this adventure was not so great. Or well, it is a simple yet cool story but i think you made it to much "fast forward". There we're no real plot! I thought first when i played it you we're actually going to search for the city! But it seems you had already found it. The companion didn't do much at all. He just walked around and did simply nothing. He could have been a great help if he didn't follow you all the time. He could haev maked the story good if you maked some extra things like he went to the darkside or something. But the plot in this adventure wasn't so complicated so that was a bit disappointing.

Playability: 4/5
When i first saw the adventure this sporean had commented: "Glitchies adventure i haev ever played". Well, i have no idea what he was talking about. I found almost no glitches in this adventure: Some of the props we're a bit weird because you could get stuck in them but that was only a minor problem. The stairs we're cool. I thought they would glitch A LOT but they didn't actually. Cheers. And the rest was good.

Detail: 3.5/5
I couldn't decide to give this a 3 or 4... So i have it a 3.5. Anyway, the detail in this adventure wasn't too shabby but i've seen much better. The props we're nice though and the misty effect blended much parts which was actually we're nice and it gave it a more "wintery" look. It was nice effects and cool props. I don't know if you made the props though but they we're set out nice. The captain you played as though was very cool! I really liked it. It could have used a bit more soundeffects though.

Overall: 3.5/5
You can download and play this adventure Here

Nice job Glass, on to the next. I am giving you the Monster Quest that was putt off for the Xmas one I already played and am going to write up the review on. That fine with you?

Drewskii wrote:

Nice job Glass, on to the next. I am giving you the Monster Quest that was putt off for the Xmas one I already played and am going to write up the review on. That fine with you?

I don't understand.

There was another adventure that needs reviewing. Do you want it or not?

Grand Master Drew wrote:

There was another adventure that needs reviewing. Do you want it or not?

Hmm.

Yeah, i'll take it.

Going to do it now or?

Drewskii wrote:

Going to do it now or?

MMMaybe.

Yes or no I need to know.

Drewskii wrote:

Yes or no I need to know.

Why?

I am going to be startin' work here pretty quick and I wont be on.

Drewskii wrote:

I am going to be startin' work here pretty quick and I wont be on.

I'll do it later.

So put it on your waiting list, its not the Xmas Special one.

Santapinne wrote:

The Search For The Lost City-mrbean5317 Rated 3.5/5

A simple adventure which feels it could have been done by anybody. It wasn't really bad but it wasn't really good either. It feels like it missed that extra glimps of Story. There we're some things that could have been developed. And here is my critique.

Story: 3/5
The story of this adventure was not so great. Or well, it is a simple yet cool story but i think you made it to much "fast forward". There we're no real plot! I thought first when i played it you we're actually going to search for the city! But it seems you had already found it. The companion didn't do much at all. He just walked around and did simply nothing. He could have been a great help if he didn't follow you all the time. He could haev maked the story good if you maked some extra things like he went to the darkside or something. But the plot in this adventure wasn't so complicated so that was a bit disappointing.

Playability: 4/5
When i first saw the adventure this sporean had commented: "Glitchies adventure i haev ever played". Well, i have no idea what he was talking about. I found almost no glitches in this adventure: Some of the props we're a bit weird because you could get stuck in them but that was only a minor problem. The stairs we're cool. I thought they would glitch A LOT but they didn't actually. Cheers. And the rest was good.

Detail: 3.5/5
I couldn't decide to give this a 3 or 4... So i have it a 3.5. Anyway, the detail in this adventure wasn't too shabby but i've seen much better. The props we're nice though and the misty effect blended much parts which was actually we're nice and it gave it a more "wintery" look. It was nice effects and cool props. I don't know if you made the props though but they we're set out nice. The captain you played as though was very cool! I really liked it. It could have used a bit more soundeffects though.

Overall: 3.5/5
You can download and play this adventure Here

Lol, nice review, though like I said in my post to review this, this wasn't my Best work. I'll look for one of great works of arts for you to review ;)

Hey Bean, if you think you have better than please post it here ASP.

Drewskii wrote:

Hey Bean, if you think you have better than please post it here ASP.

Yeah. I would love to see development!

But I would review it. Don't get jumpy Glass .

Drewskii wrote:

But I would review it. Don't get jumpy Glass .

Yeah but i would still play it.

I probably wouldn't because i'm to lazy.

Never said you could not.

I'm almost done with my amateur adventure...REALLY hope you like it...

I'm still looking for my best adventure.....

Both sound promising.

I've got one: just released it.

Name: 2078 ~ The Best of Both Worlds

Plot: (Not exactly original: from Star Trek, but..)

Chapter 13 Part 1- It's a special honor as a captain to be granted permission to board a Coalition flag ship. And it's an extraordinary honor to become one of its crew. But when an exploratory mission goes ary, it maybe up to you to save the entire Fleet.

Link: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500691695774

Pic:

It took me about 2 1/2 weeks: made the entiree ship myself and most of the props

Thanks!

Is it alright if you could review not just 1 adventure, but the whole series? Because it has a big story and it's in 15 adventures. (yep, that long to do a story).


If any of you want to do the series, here ya go
Just fish through the sporecast for episode 1.
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-mrbean5317|500344135978%3Assc-500551930531

Alright, I will take Ball's and Glass you can take Beans. Unless you want to switch it up that's fine by me.

I don't think my computer is letting me share adventures...I'll keep trying.